Rough Cuts

I'm in progress of producing my magazine and these are my rough cuts. This includes a front cover, contents page and double page spread.


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Front Cover

This is the rough cut of my front cover.


The things that I like about it are:

• Good central image. The Mise en Scene is appropriate. The compositions of the shot is also
• The front of 'The Bright Nights'
• The band name
• Inside circle 

Popular points of feedback from my teachers and class are:

• Not enough text
• Image is too dark
• Inside is in the wrong place
• 'Nights' clashes with red shirts
• Good composition of shot
• Good title and logo
• No price or issue number

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Double Page Spread

This is the rough cut of my double page spread.

The things that I like about it are:

• Tri colour scheme
• Composition of shot
• Layout of text
• Inset images

Popular points of feedback from my teachers and class were:

• Image is too blurry
• Good colour scheme
• The way the jeans stand out
• Inset images
• Good theme in interview
• Needs more text
• Layout of 3rds needs to be clearer

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Contents Page

This is the rough cut of my contents page.

The things I like about it are:

• Contents logo
• Fonts used, sans serif and serif
• Page layout
• Image

Popular points of feedback from my teachers and class were:

• Not enough text
• Needs more content
• Needs more images
• Nice use of yellow circles

The feedback helped because it pointed things out that I didn't notice my self. It also gave more opinions on my magazine, all allowing it to help me improve. I will use this feedback in help to produce my final cut of my magazine.